LEE
As he reaches for the picture, and lovingly looks at it, then
very tenderly kisses it,places it back in place.
He grabs a hose, shucks his shirt and shorts, and hoses
himself off.
He is quite well-endowed. Looks around.
LEE
Ahh, why the hell not...
He starts masturbating, stroking himself, soon is hard and
big. Shoots a big load.
He uses the tee to dry himself, pulls on his shorts, turns
around and...
CUT TO:
THE GIRL-ROCKY
She's the most gorgeous red-head he's ever seen. Think of a
young Nicole Kidman/Ann-Margaret. Creme-de-Menthe eyes.
CUT TO:
LEE
Uuhh...
He's like a fish out of water.
ROCKY
Nice picture.
She hefts a pretty good-looking camera.
Lee is still dumb-founded. What the hell just happened?
LEE
Uhh....
Rocky waves at the garden and bay below.
ROCKY
The view..the harbour ...
Leaving a lot unsaid.....
LEE
Oh, uh, yeah...great view.
ROCKY
I'm looking for the manager.
LEE
You're looking at him.
She extends her hand.
ROCKY
Hi, I'm Raquel Rhodes
She pronounces it 'ROCK-ELL"
LEE
I bet you get called Rocky a lot.
She gives him a dazzler of a smile.
ROCKY
As a matter of fact,yeah. How'd you
know?
LEE
Either that or "Red"or Rusty, but I
prefer Rocky-it suits you.
ROCKY
Thanks
(beat)
Anyway,Hi Again.
She hands him a business card. Pulls a magazine out of her
camera purse, and shoves it at him.
LEE
Hi, I'm Lee Personne.
ROCKY
Hmmm..."Personne"..? French- "No
one?"
LEE
Nom-de-Plume - use professionally,
I'm a writer. Also take pictures.
He hefts his camera.
ROCKY
Yeah? Me, too- Actually, that's why
I'm here. Remember this?
INSERT MAGAZINE PICTURE
She opens it to a picture spread-its the same one in the
shed.
LEE
Oh,yeah.
(dismissive)
I also remember I never even had
the courtesy of a reply or thanks
from you guys.
ROCKY
So, okay-thank you.
There's an embarrassed silence.
LEE
I'm obviously missing something
here.
ROCKY
You've won!
LEE
I know that-I've got the letter-and
They're celebrating up at the pub.
He pulls it out of his pocket
ROCKY
Did you read that letter?
LEE
Not all of it.
ROCKY
You remember the contest you
entered?
LEE
You mean the story?
ROCKY
Yeah.
LEE
About you supposedly being the so
called prize-and a night out at the
Premier Sex Club...
Rocky strikes a pose
ROCKY
TA-DAH!
LEE
You're shitting me!
ROCKY
'fraid not.
LEE
And you're my prize,right?
ROCKY
As it says right here in the
contract.
She waves it in front of his nose.
ROCKY
Oh,and by the way...there's
something else.
LEE
(resigned)
Oh,of course.
She looks in her case and pulls out another couple of sheets
of paper.
ROCKY
Some additions you'd better look
over.
We thought about it and changed the
outcome of the prize a bit. We want
to incorporate your story into a
movie we're making.
LEE
(doubtful)
Yeah...?
ROCKY
The release form you signed goes
into it all-we can change it as we
see fit.
Suddenly Lee Realizes the implication.
LEE
Hey waitaminnit!
ROCKY
Listen! They WANT your story-they
WANT you!
Uh..you mean you want ME to write a
movie script?
ROCKY
Yes, the contract goes into it all,
but basically you'd retain all
rights of the original story; we'd
split the profits of the movie. The
company is looking into it in a big
way-so they're hiring.
He's not quite sure where this is going, but willing to go
along.
ROCKY
Remember all the noise and
commotion with that helicopter
flying around last week? That was
for the beginning-a big grabber.
The director and editor finished
putting it together a couple of
days ago.
Lee is still trying to take it all in.
LEE
What about the actors and
actresses?
ROCKY
They're already hired. Except the
leads.
LEE
I've got a thing for red-heads, as
you know-You'd be a great lead-if
you're not turned off by her
exploits.
ROCKY
Yeah, I kinda saw myself in what
you wrote. And your picture and
writing really turned me on too.
LEE
But I'm not an actor!
ROCKY
Well,neither am I, but if you want
a red-head...
LEE
Then you weren't turned off by the
story?
ROCKY
After reading and seeing the
exploits in this...?
She picks up the magazine riffles through a few pages,and
they view the pages together.
CLOSE-UPS
1.COCK INTO PUSSY
2. Woman sucking cock
3. Man Sucking cock/woman licking balls
4. Cock into ass
5. Woman Sucking pussy
CUT TO:
LEE/ROCKY
LEE
Any of those you?
ROCKY
(teasing)
You're just gonna hafta wait and
find out.
LEE
Now that's not fair-you've seen
mine.
ROCKY
(teasingly)
Use your imagination.
Then to get back to business.
ROCKY
How many pages for the full movie?
LEE
I'd think 60-70. Most movies run
about an hour-give or take.
(beat)
Some of the newer better quality
ones are running 90 minutes.
ROCKY/LEE
(together)
There's so much...
LEE
You're right. There's lots in it,
but I wanted to make a good story.
It's also a love story.
He picks up the magazine looking at it, then picks up his
story .
ROCKY
What're you thinking?
LEE
I'll do it...W'ell do it.
ROCKY
Oh,damn...I almost forgot..I'm your
new tenant-#6
She rummages in her bag again-pulls out another sheet of
paper.
LEE
What?
He quickly scans the papers.
LEE
Looks good to me...
C'mon I'll get you the key.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT LEE'S APT
Rocky walks through the living room and out to the kitchen
which is in essence an extension of the living room.
INSERT PICTURE OF BRIDGE/OPERA HOUSE-
The view is to die for: the opera house framed by the
bridge,a few ferry boats crossing the water plus some
pleasure cruisers and small craft.
ROCKY
Wow! What a view.
LEE
The apartments all have the same
lay-out. You're right under me.
ROCKY
(teasingly)
Oh, I love the thought of being
right under you..
Lee's a bit at a loss for words, so...
LEE
There's beer in the fridge if you
like.
She goes to the fridge, and grabs two beers.
ROCKY
I could easily fall in love with
this.
LEE
I was very lucky in getting here. A
friend of mine's family owned the
property. He inherited it. He's A
Qantas steward, gone half the year,
and needed someone to look after it
collect rent, and so on. So in
exchange for all that I get a free
apartment and a small stipend. The
rest of the time I'm trying to
write.
ROCKY
I can see why you love it.
She moves away, going to the view again. She leans up against
the window door, relaxed, breathing in the fresh breeze which
brushes her hair. Lee quickly looks around grabs his camera
and clicks off a couple of shots.
Rocky snaps out of her reverie.
LEE
I just had to get that pose.
Rocky takes a swig of beer, and a small dribble runs down her
cheek.
Lee reaches out a finger and licks it off, then he pulls her
to him gently and they kiss. First gently, then deeply,
passionately.
LEE
I just had to do that..I...
The look on Rocky's face says she understands, is not
offended, might even had expected it. She reaches out to
him,strokes his face gently.
LEE
I'm not in the habit of doing
that...and I can't explain why
other than I've wanted to ever
since I saw your picture.
ROCKY
That and a lot else,huh?
LEE
Well, I guess this is about as good
a time to get into all the if's
and's and but's of the contests
rules and reg's.
ROCKY
Its all there-we decided to make it
as simple and easy as possible. We
wanted people-well, guys obviously
to write their fantasy story,and
we'd read them, evaluate them,and
decide.
LEE
How long did that take?
ROCKY
Almost three months-you wouldn't
believe the responses we got. We
read every one and we were swamped.
LEE
Yeah, but the story of you not
being able to get a date-come on!
You're the best-looking girl I've
seen in my life.
ROCKY
Well, that was a bit of poetic
license-but we needed something to
be an incentive. Contractually we
can't use/offer an actress.
LEE
And I won? What cinched it?
ROCKY
Your writing, the story..
(pause)
And that poem..where'd you ever
find it?
LEE
It's original. Just like the story.
ROCKY
I thought so.
LEE
Well,that's my story, and as the
man said, I'm sticking to it.
ROCKY
What's that supposed to mean?
LEE
Aww, Come on, Rocky-Any Guy I know
would jump at the chance just to go
out with you regardless of any
chance of sex. I Can come up with a
dozen reasons right off the bat.
ROCKY
Yeah, but the real one is you wrote
in, didn't you? So even you hoped
you'd have a chance.
LEE
Yeah, you're right. I thought you
were probably a top model hired for
the shoot, and that if anybody
really won, they'd do a last minute
switcheroo- Or maybe a slow week
and you needed something to sell
copy. But then I thought, I'm a
writer, so maybe this could be the
one.
ROCKY
The picture wasn't that bad either.
LEE
Well, it's that kinda mag isn't it?
Plus I figured, if I qualified with
the written word, I might as well
as insure it with whatever other
"talent" I possess.
He goes over to the counter takes a swig of beer. Picks up
the magazine, flips through it. His letter and pictures drop
out.
LEE
I was beginning to think it was a
complete come-on. No reply, not
even a thank-you. So who had the
final say?
ROCKY
Seeing as how it was going to be my
body on the line, so to speak, my
editor allowed me that final
option. You wouldn't have believed
the responses-it took us weeks...
LEE
Yeah, you said that.
ROCKY
Well, you could show a little
appreciation.
LEE
Who made the final decision?
ROCKY
WHO do you think?
LEE
That's all I needed to know.
(beat)
Well, I guess I should show you the
rest of the lay-out.
He gives a sweeping bow, indicating her exit.
INT. BATHROOM
ROCKY
Wow, it's big enough to have an
orgy in here.
LEE
(sarcastic)
Gee, I never thought of that...
INT. BED-ROOM
ROCKY
So this is where it all happens,
huh?
She walks around the bed-seems to check the bedposts
LEE
What's up?
ROCKY
Checking for notches
LEE
It's a new one I just put in.
ROCKY
That many, huh?
LEE
Either that or the bed'd collapse.
She'd just taken a swig, and Lee had just started, when they
both exploded with laughter. Lee spurted his out, and Rocky
Burst out laughing, dabbing at his shirt. This was the
moment, and he sweeps her up, covering her face in kisses.
He places he gently in the bed, starts to pull his pants off,
when:
ROCKY
Hey! WAITAMINNIT!!
Lee let's her go
LEE
I thought...you did say I could
show some appreciation..
ROCKY
Yeah, well me too, but....
Both feeling more than a bit embarrassed.
LEE
I probably over-reacted, but it
just...Aah, shit, I'm sorry
ROCKY
Yeah, me too. It's not that I'm
prude or anything..Gad..it's just I
think we were both a bit overcome
there..and I'd like to, but just
not yet. I'd like to get to know
you a little better okay? One of us
ought to think with a head other
than the one on your penis.
LEE
Yeah, you're probably right, we
should back off a bit. After all
you'll be living here in a couple
of weeks.
They kiss again,and leads her out. He gives her the keys.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. DAY-SOME TIME LATER
And Lee is up on the roof again, Some repairs, but as usual
he has his camera. He stands up kneading his back, turns and
snaps off a few shots of the bay.
He climbs down the ladder, and as he passes what is now
Rocky's flat, notices a slight movement thru the shades.
CUT TO:
HIS POV-THRU SHADES
Rocky is spread-eagled on a kind of Mama-San chair looking at
a picture, while masturbating.
CLOSE-UP
ROCKY'S CUNT
As she fingers herself. Yes, Its a beautiful shade of red
like her hair.
BACK TO:
LEE
Nearly falling off the ladder; then he grabs his camera and
focusses in on Rocky. Snaps off shots looking at...
INT -ROCKY
Concentrating on the picture and satisfying herself, she
finally, cums, and dropping the picture, squeezes her legs
together with a deep groaning sigh.
CLOSE-UP
THROUGH THE SHADES/LEE'S POV
Looking thru camera lens He zooms in on....
CLOSE-UP
THE PICTURE
It's him in the garden, jacking off.
CUT TO:
EXT-DAY
LEE
Once again grabbing for support. The ladder teeters and he
loses his balance, and the stepladder falls backward.
LEE
Ooohhhh....SHIT!!
CUT TO:
THE POOL
SPLOOSH!!!
CLOSE-UP
LEE
As he surfaces, splashing around.
CUT TO:
ROCKY'S FACE-LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW
ROCKY
My God, Lee-are you all right?
Before he can answer, she's disappeared.
Lee swims to the edge and pulls himself out. He sees-
CLOSE-UP
HIS CAMERA
On the lawn-seemingly unharmed. He quickly scoops it up.
Just then Rocky comes running around.
ROCKY
What the hell just happened? Are
you all-right?
Shakes himself.
LEE
Something got in my eye, just lost
my balance.
ROCKY
Here,let me help..
She puts an arm around him, and he reacts with a grimace.
ROCKY
Okay, Mr. Macho-man, let's have a
look...
She looks at his back.
CLOSE-UP
A BIG RED WELT
JUST ABOVE THE KIDNEY
ROCKY
Well, I hope it was worth it.
LEE
You'd never believe it.
INT. LEE'S
She's administering to his injury,as he has his arms up in
the air.
As she comes around to face him, she notices the growing lump
in his crotch. The tip of her tongue comes out.
Lee suddenly brings his arms down around her,entrapping her,
and kisses her deeply, passionately.
She responds in kind, but inadvertently touches his wound,
causing him to wince in pain.
However her other hand is probing his front, and soon both
her hands are pulling his pants down. His cock pops out long
and hard. She wastes no time in servicing him.
CLOSE-UP
THE BEST BLOW-JOB EVER
As she lovingly, longingly, slowly, rapidly, languidly,
mouths him. He is soon bucking, and pulls out to cum.
CLOSE-UP
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